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Topic: Lost
Posted By: Futuristic
Subject: Lost
Date Posted: May 8, 2008 at 12:13am
There is a light all around the room but i'm still in the dark,why can't people see what i see?
 
I been in the dark for 20 years, those younger than me don't understand
and those older either say "I been there" or "I'm still there.
 
This room is filled with people but no one hears me.
If this room is called life, how do i escape and still manage to live forever?


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Replies: 3
Posted By: Futuristic
Date Posted: May 8, 2008 at 12:13am
There is a light all around the room but i'm still in the dark,why can't people see what i see?
 
I been in the dark for 20 years, those younger than me don't understand
and those older either say "I been there" or "I'm still there.
 
This room is filled with people but no one hears me.
If this room is called life, how do i escape and still manage to live forever?
!- S dha ub` $ 44bb ($` %4$), !,-!% $- `p $$

Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: May 8, 2008 at 6:32am

hmmmm......
so is this more about linsomeness

who's lost?
the writer or the people who can not see, explain, or understand?
Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:03:57

Posted By: Futuristic
Date Posted: May 8, 2008 at 2:04pm
This is towards the people in life who feel that their trapped in their on way of life looking  for a way out.!- S dha ub` $ 44bb ($` %4$), !,-!% $- `p $$

Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: May 8, 2008 at 3:34pm
cool
Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:04:33


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