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Topic: Crazy Maze
Posted By: jamaicakid85
Subject: Crazy Maze
Date Posted: Sep 30, 2007 at 10:26am
Money don't make my world go 'round
I'm reaching up for the higher ground
to a warm and peaceful place
I can rest my weary face
Life's answers we're trying to find
battling inside our minds
where do I go from here?
Will all my friends be there?

Cause we're livin, livin in a crazy maze
and we're fighting, we're fighting to rise above the haze
Light's at the end of the tunnel
Sometimes the journey is long
There are many theories
on who's right and who's wrong

Pressure is on I have to choose
I've got nothing to lose
I close my eyes I take a chance
I know there's different days
What's the key to a happy life?
A healthy mind and lots of spice.
Running barefoot through the trees
that's my idea of free

I've packed my bags I'm on my way
I don't know where I'm going to stay
I'm on a trainbound destiny
I can set my spirit free
 
(Desree)


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What are your thoughts on this Anomis ? How do you interpret this one right here? To me it sounds like they are saying that life itself is a maze and we get lost sometimes but we have to keep finding the right way. Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:49:05

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Replies: 11
Posted By: jamaicakid85
Date Posted: Sep 30, 2007 at 10:26am
Money don't make my world go 'round
I'm reaching up for the higher ground
to a warm and peaceful place
I can rest my weary face
Life's answers we're trying to find
battling inside our minds
where do I go from here?
Will all my friends be there?

Cause we're livin, livin in a crazy maze
and we're fighting, we're fighting to rise above the haze
Light's at the end of the tunnel
Sometimes the journey is long
There are many theories
on who's right and who's wrong

Pressure is on I have to choose
I've got nothing to lose
I close my eyes I take a chance
I know there's different days
What's the key to a happy life?
A healthy mind and lots of spice.
Running barefoot through the trees
that's my idea of free

I've packed my bags I'm on my way
I don't know where I'm going to stay
I'm on a trainbound destiny
I can set my spirit free
 
(Desree)


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What are your thoughts on this Anomis ? How do you interpret this one right here? To me it sounds like they are saying that life itself is a maze and we get lost sometimes but we have to keep finding the right way. Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:49:05


Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: Sep 30, 2007 at 12:35pm
As usual you hit hit the nail on the head. Yes, I could not have said it any better myself.
I like it, it's sorta melancholy.
I never forgot that you said you would write something   roseKaren Shelton2015-08-04 18:50:26


Posted By: jamaicakid85
Date Posted: Oct 1, 2007 at 10:00pm
I will when I can focus and keep my mind from bouncing on a variety of things when it gets cold again I will have no choice but to stay in the house and I will write something.


Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: Oct 1, 2007 at 11:36pm
CoolKaren Shelton2015-08-04 18:50:52


Posted By: jamaicakid85
Date Posted: Oct 4, 2007 at 8:51am
Yeah unfortunately it's not that time yet so I'm a little more focused on external affairs for now enjoy this weather while I can.


Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: Oct 4, 2007 at 9:27am

yep we will be frostbitten soon, in the midwest,
Autumn is the best.
Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:51:28


Posted By: jamaicakid85
Date Posted: Oct 7, 2007 at 3:23pm
Lol Chicago has some cold winters, I'm currently in Massachusetts and we have cold winters up here too lol.


Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: Oct 7, 2007 at 8:37pm

oh yeah, so I hear

Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:52:18


Posted By: jamaicakid85
Date Posted: Oct 16, 2007 at 8:10am
I was freezing my ass off this morning speaking of which.


Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: Oct 16, 2007 at 12:47pm

dang already? Well you know it's coming on and if its anything like last year it's gonna be hellacious, icey, cant drive, lights out for 3-4 days it gets like madness I'm in S. Il. on the boarder of STL
Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:52:44


Posted By: jamaicakid85
Date Posted: Oct 16, 2007 at 1:10pm
O aight at least it's not as bad as what areas like Buffalo,NY have to look foward to on a yearly basis they can get 4-6 feet of snow in one shot.


Posted By: Anomis
Date Posted: Oct 16, 2007 at 4:17pm

good night nurse!!!!!
OMG, geeeeZ
but the good thing the GREAT thing is that they know how to handle it out there, on this side we stagnate for atleast a half a day b4 they wrap their minds around it LOL
NY, and Chi, know whats up.....LOL
Karen Shelton2015-08-04 18:53:18



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