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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Joined: Jan 28, 2007
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Posted: Aug 02, 2007 at 1:30pm
Man I'm flying out the tunnel daybreak
dead body in the trunk so I'm heading to the lake
Gonna dump him with the gun near the Potterhouse word to T.D. Jake
Its not my fault he was so fake
I'm freaking out visions of specters in my candle lit room
Similar to a 5 year old screaming Momma Get The Broom
Must be a Boosie cus I'm going zoom zoom zoom
sh*t I seen a cop Knew I should've dropped off the boom
I'm feeling empty similar to Loon
I ain't mean it I'm just a goon
I knew I should of done it quick man it stinks I need to drop this soon
Just passed a cop and hes coming up on me
Sweats running down my brow I can't see
I'm not a killer I'm executive status
I slowly pull over and the Cop makes his way out his apparatus
I'm sliding the gun on my lap in case I gotta put him in caskets
He look mad fat like the wolf hes making his way to my basket
The fear on my face Naw man you can't mask it
He asks for license and registration and I'm fumbling
I pull it out and my words I'm jumblin
f**k man I'm crumblin
Man says all my sh*ts in order
gives the ticket and I damn near ran for the border
Why he got a mess with the Reaper
I don't want to be that dude
I reach the creek and the body smells like rotten food
I'm scared man this conduct is rood
I'm racing with the psychology like Freud
The car lights dimming damn that Texas Tea
Its so crude
I figure I'll dump the body and the car
By the time they find out I'll be way past mars
I hear a siren I'm freaking like a a barrel house
Man I'm tripping like I just switched my spouse
Officer Johnson is creeping up quiet like a mouse
But he don't know I got him like red eye
This is it its do or die
I pull out the .cal and shoot
Killed the pg dead like Pork
And now theres blood on the ground to boot
I load him up in the Caprice
I didn't git to finish paying the lease
I push it in the tributary like Ghost to the Wu
Its over they passed they expiration date they no longer new
Man I shot my mans what gaul
I paid my last respects to my n**** Paul.



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jamaicakid85 View Drop Down
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Posted: Aug 02, 2007 at 1:30pm
Very interesting..........

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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Posted: Aug 02, 2007 at 1:30pm
I'm thinking bout doing a series. I'm a do it like Dostoevsky's Crime And Punishment. I'm a do a prequel where I explain the circomestances that led to the murder and the murder itself. Then I'll do a sequel where I deal with the guilt and eventually confess.

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stormy_seas View Drop Down
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Joined: Nov 26, 2005
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Posted: Aug 02, 2007 at 1:30pm

a cry for help maybe, lol jp

lets see the sequel


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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Posted: Aug 02, 2007 at 1:30pm
Aight. I'm a do the prequels fist cus I got most of it written in my mind.

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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Posted: Aug 02, 2007 at 1:30pm
f**k this I can't think of anything. Eh judge it on what there is. Maybe I'll continue it someday.

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Anomis View Drop Down
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Posted: Aug 14, 2007 at 1:30pm
nice, I enjoy a colorful story.
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