1st Time

Wuts good this is my 1st time ever puttin ryhmes and writing sometimes i just have lines in my head but never really put them down. tell me what y'all think. it all from the top of my head took me less than 2 minutes.

 

i eat emcees for breakfast
niggas is cheerios and i got o's in the lexus
nigga step on my toes i'll put holes in his lexus
leave ya body stiff whether ya from bk or houston texas
my name rings like the liberty bell
but i dont crack under pressure i rise like a phoenix
im eating nice but you starving like bulemics
be smart dont be a retard
cus i catch bodies like those in leotards
mama always told dont hang with snakes
so i keep one eye open on you rats
another on the jakes
cus they always tryin to stop a black man rise
so i always rock the air forces
so cus im always flyin in the skies
went to that honda to the x5
haters keep on hating
cus that means im on my grind
and when im on my grind
im bound to shine.

 

pmp lil g ne tips would be good to get better