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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Joined: Jan 28, 2007
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Posted: Jun 27, 2007 at 9:30pm
Yeah I love my wifey
She around for life G
I remember when we first met
I was bout 13
All about the C.R.E.A.M.
She never had a need
It was always all about me
Sleek and chique
A lil on the heavy
We had problems like a pull and levy
But shes always down to ride in the chevy
When shyt pops off
She always pop off
Like she got a mind of her own
And she ain't even grown
remember when I got thrown
a lil drunk
got in a scuffle
real trouble
but you was at my side
down to ride
without my wits
you gave out those hits
afterwards it was chill
till  his partners
had to die like martyrs
it was ill
shyt was the greatest thrill
Time flies by when I see you
reminisce  on worse times
Kinda like rhymes
cus its constant
kinda like how you merked my conscience
I got you that negligee
so we tested it out
I screamed AY
there was no reasonable doubt
some niccas was ready to die
he came to us
and we ran through him like a bus
we didn't even have to try
we a modern day bonny and clyde

What yall think? An idea popped in my head and I ran with it. I think it was fine for my first attempt at rhyming. Also do yall know what I'm referring to by "wifey"?
jamaicakid852007-07-20 07:33:51

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S.L.A.B. View Drop Down
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Joined: Jun 19, 2007
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Posted: Jun 27, 2007 at 9:30pm
[QUOTE=Willie SKRILLA] do yall know what I'm referring to by "wifey"?
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you mean yo bytch?, no disrespect but isnt it self explanitory...wifey?
 
yo, if it was freestyle fa real, it ran together aight
 
if you wrote it, you should have revised it a lil more
 
i give it to you though Clap
jamaicakid852007-07-20 07:34:18

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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Posted: Jun 28, 2007 at 9:30pm
Yeah looking back there are a few alterations that could be done and naw I didn't mean the real wifey. Look a little closer.

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chrisdog212 View Drop Down
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Posted: Jul 01, 2007 at 9:30pm
he talkin about his gun fam
 
 
^^ atleast i think he is
chrisdog2122007-07-01 18:46:18

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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Posted: Jul 01, 2007 at 9:30pm
[QUOTE=chrisdog212]he talkin about his gun fam
 
 
^^ atleast i think he is
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You right

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S.L.A.B. View Drop Down
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Posted: Jul 02, 2007 at 9:30pm
haha, thats badass
 
i thought you was talkin about some dumb as hoe
fa real, whuit girls is gonna stick around for all that?
 
i should have known Ermm

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25cent View Drop Down
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Posted: Jul 08, 2007 at 9:30pm
LOL work on it willie

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Willie SKRILLA View Drop Down
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Posted: Jul 08, 2007 at 9:30pm
Hip Hop Forum revival. Lets make it happen.

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jamaicakid85 View Drop Down
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Posted: Jul 12, 2007 at 9:30pm
Aye man that was pretty tight.
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